That’s
my favourite time, sailing across the gap between the red and the
green; it takes good timing to find that gap, that place of pause
between two regimens, and when you hit it right, you know... sailing
through the amber, I call it, because as you take off, through all the
warning signs, the moment you cross the grid you go into freedom. The
Greeks call it chiasma, the place of absence at the centre of a
crossroad, the gap that none of the four roads enters; a dark space in
the middle of the night.
Loss and change and the sudden exhilaration the gaps in
our
lives
give
are at the heart of Susan Hancock’s fiction. The cities she
creates are
thronged with people telling their own stories. At times, strangely
silent and deserted, they become the sites of an oddly visionary grace.
Her prose, seemingly casual and airy, is structured and
considered. A
keen balance of dialogue and description develops into metaphor and
image. It embraces heartbreak and angels.
I
find its wit, sophistication,
colour and technical command impressive.
Helen Garner
Hancock’s
writing sailed into my world like some startling and haunting song...
Her stories have that breathless emotional depth that you find only in
very fine writing. They are stories of the lives of educated, urban
upper-class men and women. She charts the disturbances of their
relationships, the ecstacy and the pain of love. She’s
uncanny in her
observation and has a richly slanted vision framed by a glittering
intelligence. Her best theme is reflecting exactly how the way we live
affects the children of these fraught relationships.
Helen
Elliott, The Sydney
Morning Herald
Hancock’s
stories are compellingly human: she takes us close to the warmth and
drama of family life, close to the lovers and children around whom her
stories swim. Although dense with emotive concerns, her prose remains
open and considered throughout... Finely tuned empathy for a history
and a landscape.
Joe
Hill, Overland
Hancock
is brilliant with the particular, building up characters and situations
by tenderly and suggestively laying down detail after detail, but she
keeps a steady eye on the general case as well... The title story, ‘Sailing
Through the Amber’ is a little
masterpiece... Hancock
writes
like an angel. Treat yourself.
Anne
French, The Listener
(New Zealand)
Cover painting Angel of
the
Annunciation by Colin McCahon
ISBN 1876044020
Published 1995
145 pgs
$19.95
Sailing Through the Amber
book
sample
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Mollie’
s
Windows
The Passions of the Poor
The Porcelain Face
The Seal Wife
Passing Through
Sailing Through the Amber
Where You Start
Behind The Glass
A Story Set in Venice
Goodbye
Windsong
Rubaiyat
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Reviews
Perils
of life in the danger zone
Joy Mackenzie (winner of the
Sunday
Star Short Story Competition 1991)
Sunday Star
(New Zealand)
It takes good
timing to
find the gap, between the regiments of red and green. When you hit it
right, you know.
Susan Hancock’s short story ‘Windsong’
(published here in her first
collection) won the
Sunday
Star
Short Story Competition in 1994. The story is an impressionistic one
about a boy’s disturbance at his parents’
separation.
The bereft but enduring deserted wife is a recurring theme in
Hancock’s
stories. A spectrum of emotions are depicted without overstating the
anger or frustration of those left behind.
In ‘The Porcelain Face’, she adeptly portrays the
bewilderment of a
child. ‘I hate the whole
weld,’
the child says. ‘And I hate all the planets.’
The same characters inhabit many of these stories: the abandoned wife
Anna, her child James, her sister, her brother, a best friend. Anna is
mostly a protective mother.
In one sense she reassures her son by recounting the time he heard a
‘dangerous noise’ in his room which she thought was
a blowfly behind
his skirting board. ‘Until I saw the little puffs of
smoke’, she says.
‘And it made me think maybe there was a little tiny dragon
down behind
your skirting board, but it was really an electric wire So you were
quite right all the time, it
was
a dangerous noise.’
On another occasion Anna is not so comforting. Noticing her child
‘shivering and pallid’ in the shallow end of a
swimming pool, she is
suddenly distressed at their predicament.
‘Oh get out of the water you ghastly little wimp,’
she says. ‘God, why
couldn’t I have had one ordinary, cheerful child instead of
you? It’s
not my fault your father’s left… and
there’s nothing I can do to make
it better, so just remember that.’
Often a character gains a flash of enlightenment. In. the title story,
an idle comment from the female narrator about moving in with her lover
and his wife elicits his response: ‘You
are a fighter,
aren’t you? You’d do
anything for me.’
His presumptuous remark illuminates the situation and the woman
realises she has fallen out of love. She likens her situation to that
of driving through the amber light at a crossroads:
‘That’s my
favourite time, sailing across the gap between red and green; it takes
good timing to find the gap, the place of pause in between the two
regiments of red and green, and when you hit it right, you
know.’
This is stringent writing, with darkness and lightness of mood conveyed
by realistic dialogue and detailed descriptions of landscape (New
Zealand or Australia, where Hancock now lives).
Art is an important component, and it is fitting that Hancock has
chosen Colin McCahon’s painting
The
Angel of the Annunciation for the cover of her first book.
Hancock’s characters are credible and her writing is vivid
and
technically assured.
I look forward to reading more.
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Sailing
Through the
Amber
Helen Horton
Imago, Vol.
9, No. 2, winter
1997
Sailing
Through the Amber is a collection of stories where the
main
characters are trying to find their own identities. ‘I went
around
being all the different people that I was’ (pg. 44) is the
crux of
their dilemma - they come across as divided souls, drifting through the
segments of their lives, some of which are crisis points. Anna, who
figures in several of the stories, is trying to cope with being left by
her partner/husband with a small child. Equally tenacious is the
drawstring relationship between woman and child - it surfaces in dreams
as well as the action.
The stories give a strange feeling of the protagonist standing aside
and watching/analysing at the same time as taking part in the action,
more often than not when this includes the resolution of a love
situation. The philosophy is contained in the last sentence of
‘Behind
the Glass’; ‘if you live where you don’t
belong,’ you are either
‘imprisoned, or on the outside - behind the glass.’
Even the secondary
characters are tainted with this sense of not quite reality living,
such as the brother who at the end of the title story ‘goes
off to his
room, that place of mystery, of listening.’ (pg. 66). While
most of the
stories are of women in this state, ‘Windsong’ is
of a child, a boy,
who drifts in the limbo of a broken home.
The final story is an attempt to come to terms with this identity
problem associated with restlessness of spirit that pervades all the
stories. Here the wanderer, having re-entered for a while the place of
her roots, is assured by a sister that there will always be somewhere
for her to come home to.
There is a cohesive tone to the whole collection; the stories not only
have inter-related characters, they are written in the same style, with
a mix of perception of detail and imagery that create the atmosphere
and scenes well, while interspersed with tight and relevant dialogue.
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Intensified
Moments
Joe Hill
Overland,
No. 146, Autumn 1997
While Hampton’s streets are
punctuated by silences of strangeness in
Letters to Francesca
[Richards],
the spaces of Susan Hancock’s stories in
Sailing through the Amber
are
filled with the sombre quiet of waiting and knowing. She describes air
and light as if they were water and her silences flow like liquids into
lives weighed down by failing relationships, displaced childhoods and
mid-life crises. Sadness, loss and emotional rebirth are recurring
themes. Hancock’s stories are compellingly human: she takes
us close to
the warmth and drama of family life, close to the lovers and children
around whom her stories swim. Although dense with emotive concerns, her
prose remains open and considered throughout. In
‘Rubaiyat’, sisters
Louise and Lyddie share the task of sorting and discarding their dead
father’s belongings. We connect with them, not because they
tell us
about the intensity of their feelings, but because we can observe it,
in the understated details of their actions and the corners of their
everyday worlds. In this way Hancock’s narratives focus on
the internal
workings of characters’ lives without needing to overstate or
explain
the mechanics.
There is easy movement into abstractions; from concrete details of
households and holidays into shimmering translucent metaphor. The
simple acts of cleaning a window or repairing a vase frame the traumas
and joys of rebuilding and rediscovering complicated lives. Travelling
is also important, as both a metaphor for framing emotional change and
a narrative device for intensifying and concentrating action. In
‘Behind the Glass’, a car trip through wet New
Zealand hills plays out
the drama of a broken marriage and the difficult consequence for a
mother and her son. Travelling, or simply arriving, or leaving, is also
a way of touching family roots and cultural heritage. Hancock is a New
Zealander by birth, and it is when she returns to New Zealand in her
stories that she is most engaging. Here we read through her finely
tuned empathy for a history and a landscape, and it is here too that
the gentle rhythm and keen visual and emotive sensitivities of
Sailing through the Amber
are at
their most potent.
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Books
Go into freedom
Sailing
Through
the Amber
Anne French
Listener
[New Zealand], 29
March 1997
Here is the loving
attention to detail
that most women lavish only on their closest friends.
Susan Hancock: intimate, tender, revealing, true.
You can keep your Emilies and Kirsties and Rosies. For my money, Susan
Hancock is our most exciting cultural export for years. Susan who? Let
me explain. She is a New Zealander who has spent a while (years? a
decade? more?) living in Australia. Until a couple of years ago, she
taught at La Trobe University in Melbourne. And she can write.
Several of the stories in this collection have won prizes; and most of
us haven’t heard of her. She is so good that pretty soon the
Aussies
will start pretending she is theirs. But she is definitely one of us.
There are little signs all over the stories. ‘It is a strange
country
for insects, Lewis and I agree. Piles of ants like old tea-leaves lie
heaped in comers...’ ‘I wonder if they’re
living somewhere like Rotorua
where all the cloud shadows have a yellow underside as they fall down
the long heights of the light, and the air over the baking pine forests
that stretch for miles is electric and dead.’ ‘I
think we needed to
come to Australia just so we could step far enough back to get our own
place in focus, the way people who are long-sighted have to
do.’
Hancock has a blood-hound’s nose for the traces of emotional
complexity. She writes about women and their relationships (with their
children, their lovers, their ex-husbands, their friends) with the
loving attention to detail and to meaning that most women lavish only
on their closest friends. The whole collection, once you’ve
read and
reread it a few times, is like a weekend of conversations with people
you’ve known for 20 years: intimate, tender, revealing,
funny, true.
Hancock is brilliant with the particular, building up characters and
situations by tenderly and suggestively laying down detail after
detail, but she keeps a steady eye on the general case as well.
(‘It is
a strange world of women that I belong to now. Some of us have
children; not many of us have men. We all have delicate names - Alison,
Laura, Rose - fragile, elusive names our mothers gave us for the men we
never met.’) She has a great ear for dialogue and damning
admissions.
(‘He looked at her with a kind of cold patience.
‘Children don’t need
to live with both parents,’ he said. ‘Look at me -
I haven’t even seen
my father since I was four.’ She looked.’)
She’s succinct. Her prose is
vivid, pungent and subtle.
The title story, ‘Sailing Through the Amber’ is a
little masterpiece.
It begins with a woman, and an argument, and a dream. It seems to be
about the woman having dinner with her married lover, and falling out
of love with him between one sentence and the next. ‘He bends
his face
very low to the plate when he eats, so that his eyes seem to ride up in
his forehead and his gaze becomes suspicious, like a wombat I once
frightened...’ Not until the last few paragraphs does the
real subject
reveal itself: it’s not the emptiness of the present love
affair that’s
significant, but the narrator’s realisation at the beginning
of the
story that ‘all the time I’m pretending that
I’m happy again and that
I’m not missing the other man, the man that I’ve
lost’. The metaphor
for that loss is timing the traffic lights, sailing across between
green and red. ‘...Sailing through the amber, I call it,
because as you
take off, through all the warning signs, the moment you cross the grid
you go into freedom. The Greeks called it chiasma, the place of absence
at the centre of a crossroads, the gap that none of the four roads
enters; a dark space in the middle of the night.’
Susan Hancock’s publishers can’t proofread for
toffee. The binding is
cheap, and the McCahon on the front has been crudely cropped and given
a nasty orange cast. But Hancock writes like an angel. Treat yourself.
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Fiction
Sailing Through the Amber
Janet Hughes (English teacher and writer)
New Zealand Books
[New Zealand], Issue 26, Vol. 6, No. 5, December 1996
The title of Susan Hancock’s volume of short stories,
Sailing Through the Amber,
strucks me as a welcome change from cryptic single words and the
opening story bore out its promise of lyricism amply.
‘Mollie’s Windows’ is lyrical, lucid and
disconcerting. It traces the emotional curve of a day in a
woman’s life, using light on, in and through windows, as a
correlative. There is a complex symbolic traffic between the intensely
vivid imagery and the woman’s psyche. The light figures as
cause
and effect, projection and influence, image and medium; her state of
mind is reflected and affected, colours and is coloured.
The storyline is exiguous. We learn a little about Mollie’s
circumstances, watch her wash her windows in a sunny mood, learn a
little about an old acquaintance she meets at the pub. There is just
enough said and seen to discompose Mollie’s humour and worry
us.
We know enough to fear knowing more, and our understanding is
reinforced by the negative transformation the imagery takes as she
walks home, and tries to shut out the light of the moon. That is all.
It is an exquisitely crafted story, calling often on resources more
common in poetry than prose, with a formal elegance at the opposite end
of the spectrum from [Raewyn] Alexander’s also poetic
language
[in
Fat].
The imagery renders
elusive permutations of mood concrete and intelligible. The minimal
action is thought-provoking and open-ended but not baffling or cryptic.
Most of the stories deploy similar resources in differing proportions:
striking visual imagery; fractured relationships; lyricism; fragmentary
dialogue; loose or open ends. Many of them can stand proudly in the
line traceable back to Mansfield, though few combine the elements quite
so lucently and elegantly as ‘Mollie’s
Windows’. And
some left me feeling frustrated or baffled. One such was the title
story and the title itself bears upon my irritation.
I misunderstood it. Out of context, I took it to refer to mood, a
cruisy sense of moving easily through a benign, enchanted atmosphere
like the golden light in the McCahon on the cover. An so often
Hancock’s imagery colours the very air with projected mood -
in
‘Mollie’s Windows’ it is sky-blue with
heat, good
humour and birdsong. But I had it wrong, I discovered when I read the
story. It was about traffic lights:
...sailing
across the gap between the red and the green... sailing through the
amber, I call it, because as you take off, through all the warning
signs, the moment you cross the grid you go into freedom. The Greeks
call it chiasma, the place of absence at the centre of a crossroad... a
dark space in the middle of the night.
And I continued to understand imperfectly, not just because our traffic
lights don’t show amber before green as Australian ones do
[in
fact Australian lights show amber before red, not before green]. My
problem was with the obscure, teasing connection between the metaphor
and the fragmentary action. Sometimes Hancock’s rich imagery
fills the air and colours the light till they are no longer transparent
and all that is illuminated is the character’s or
narrator’s mood. Reading these stories felt a bit like
navigating
something thick and syrupy, warmly glowing but ultimately a hindrance
to progress. Amber, perhaps?
Some of these stories I think suffer from an excess of refinement or
sophistication; they ask a lot, perhaps a little too much, of the
reader. At times they made me think longingly of the way Poppy in
[Raewyn Alexander’s]
Fat
projects her subjectivity on to everything but in a way that defines
what it bounces off, like radar. The reader doesn’t have to
feel
trapped in her often frankly distorted perception, like an insect in
amber. Hancock’s stories demand effort from the reader but at
least they do not make one feel got at. They maintain a cool distance,
where so many short stories resort to tricks to manipulate our sympathy
or understanding, by way of compensation, I suppose, for lack of space
in which to engage us less forcibly. The effort called for may be too
much for some readers but in most instances it is richly rewarded. Even
the most challenging stories are elegant examples of the
storyteller’s art, exhibiting a graceful, distinctive style
and
an exceptionally sure touch.
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Reviews
Sarah Quigley
Landfall,
No. 192, November
1996
The settings for Susan Hancock’s first collection of short
stories,
Sailing
Through the Amber, are
equally important, equally vivid [as in recent fiction set in urban New
Zealand], but more varied. Hancock was educated at Canterbury
University, then at Oxford, and has finally settled in Melbourne where,
until recently, she lectured at La Trobe University; her stories, too,
wander between Europe, Australia and New Zealand. ‘The
Passion of the
Poor’ and ‘A Story Set in Venice’;
conjure up the luminous light and
sea of Italy; ‘Rubaiyat’ unfolds from the steep
Brooklyn hills of
Wellington.
The descriptions of New Zealand are the most evocative but despite this
Hancock is less firmly grounded in this country than Shaw or Alexander.
One of her characters feels the ‘exile’s
pain’ but is not ready to be
claimed by time or place, and there is a sense of autobiographical
truth behind these words. The visual detail throughout the collection
is strong, and the imagery arresting: in the evocative
‘Windsong’ the
sky is ‘post-marked’ with blue stars, and the
boy’s voice is a seagull,
hanging its ‘two winged hooks of complaint’.
Although some take rural settings, the majority of the stories reflect
an urban influence; they also reveal Hancock’s academic
background. Her
characters are well-educated, articulate: through their dialogue and
reactions she explores the themes of isolation, separation and the
nature of love. Occasionally, the symbolism placed on everyday events
seems excessive; you wish for something to be simply what it is, not
what it is made to represent. In particular, the lengthy story
‘Goodbye’ - about the arrival of an enigmatic
stranger at a house-party
- labours under the weight of its mysticism. It is in the small details
that Hancock excels: a twist of speech, a flash of colour; when she
strays too far from these her writing loses some of its clarity and
edge.
Sailing Through the Amber
is
less easily categorised than
Black
Light [Laura Solomon],
Fat
[Raewyn Alexander] or
Birdie
[Tina Shaw]: it is less specific in its focus on a contemporary and
urban New Zealand and less directly aimed at a particular generation of
readers. But it has in common with them that certain down-to-earth
quality which marks all four out as progressive fiction. Their worlds
are the worlds of today and tomorrow rather than yesterday.
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Negotiating
the Gaps
Sailing
Through
the Amber
Ruth Starke (academic and writer)
Australian
Women’s Book Review,
Vol. 8, No. 2, June 1996 (pgs 36-37)
In the title story of Susan Hancock’s first published book -
and
it is one of the best - the central character describes the
sort
of driver she is: someone who takes risks at traffic lights, who sails
across the opening between red and green and finds a brief freedom in
that momentary gap where no roads intersect. The married man
with
whom she is having a half-hearted affair is a different sort
of
driver: cautious, calculating, unwilling (and no doubt unable) to take
risks. He is, of course, Mr Wrong.
Other stories in the collection are more impenetrable, especially when
they wander into deeply metaphorical territory in exploring
the
nature of reality. They start on a firm foundation - a mother and son
on a camping holiday pitch a makeshift tent in the darkness; tourists
in Italy play cards in the kitchen of their rented villa - but like the
hapless campers, the stories sometimes slide into murky
territory
where meaning is obscured.
New Zealand looms large in many of the stories (the author is
originally from that country), as does the natural world. Indeed,
Hancock’s protagonists seem incapable of taking a step or
drawing a breath without an intense consciousness of
the
interaction of light, wind, sun, stars, moon, sky and rain. This works
to dramatic effect when used sparingly, as in ‘The Seal
Wife’. The cumulative effect, however, is to give
the
stories a certain sameness and to foreground nature and the
elements rather than letting them reflect and comment on the
characters’ emotional lives.
Recurring themes are death, separation, pain and inadequacy
(often
connected with motherhood), and most of the stories are
written
from a woman’s perspective. This doesn’t
automatically
classify a book as feminist - gender, for example, is very rarely an
ingredient in the dilemmas and disappointments these women face
- but a preoccupation with the female psyche is
central to
Hancock’s writing.
It is their determination not to be victims which allows these
educated, urban, middleclass women to rise above setbacks and
separations. Humour, however, is rarely present: this is a deeply
serious collection. A few laughs, a few smiles even, would have been
welcome.
Having said that, the best story in the collection,
‘Windsong’, is written from the viewpoint of a
young boy
about to commit suicide in the wake of his parents’
separation. Lyrical and deeply moving, it is written with economy,
clarity and compassion.
Perhaps it is significant that ‘Windsong’ was a
prizewinner
in a popular newspaper-short-story competition. Many other
stories
in the collection will only be fully appreciated by sophisticated and
persistent readers willing to read slowly, to ponder, and to
read
again. And even then they may frequently find themselves still
stuck in the gap instead of sailing through.
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Picks & Pans
Sailing
Through
the Amber
Jamie Grant
Who Weekly,
15 April 1996
A woman meets an old friend who is sitting in a pub, ‘a small
child
half-concealed on his knee’. She learns that he has recently
been
widowed, and the discovery brings her to confront her own
self-obsession, understanding for the first time ‘her
husband’s
bitterness one night before he left, the night before she brought home
the lamp she’d found. ‘Just like you.’
he’d said, ‘standing in a
corner, illuminating nothing much except himself.’’
In the title story, a man’s careless remark to the
woman with
whom he is having an extramarital affair (‘You’d do
anything for me,’
he says) transforms the way she sees him: ‘And that did it.
One minute
I was inside the situation, the next I was on the outside, looking
in.’
The feeling she has, she decides, is like that one you have while
driving a car through an amber light, ‘that place of pause
between the
two regimens of red and green’.
Like many women writers. Hancock is a late starter, delayed by
marriages, children and an academic career before publishing this first
collection while in her forties, but hers has been a talent worth
waiting for. Her prose style is rich and evocative, but most
importantly, she understands that stories should have a point to them,
rather than being mere transcribed excerpts from everyday life. In each
of the pieces in this collection, distinctly recognisable characters
undergo experiences like those summarised above, in which their lives,
and their way of seeing themselves, are transformed by a particular,
light-drenched instant.
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Embracing
the worlds of women’s writing
Philippa Hawker
The Age, 9
March 1996
Sailing
Through the Amber is a collection of a dozen stories by
Susan
Hancock. In the title story, the narrator is being driven home by her
married lover. As he approaches an intersection, she reflects on the
difference between them, saying, ‘This is my favorite, time,
sailing
across the gap between red and green ... Sailing through the amber, I
call it, because as you take off, through all the warning signs, the
moment you cross the grid you go into freedom. The Greeks call it
chiasma, the place of absence at the centre of a crossroad, the gap
that none of the four roads enters; a dark space in the middle of the
night.’
Many of Hancock’s stories seem to be about that moment of
transition,
of a passage through emptiness and beyond. She writes of encounters,
revelations and longings in evocative, yearning prose.
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Dark Spaces and Chilly Tales
Sailing
Through the Amber
Fia Clendinnen
Australian Book Review,
No.
178, February/March 1996
Sailing Through the Amber
is
Susan Hancock’s first published book, a collection of short
stories.
These stories are all set in an emotional territory Hancock calls
‘the
gap’, ‘the dark space in the middle of the
night’. It’s an uneasy and
comfortless place where nothing is quite what it seems. The stories are
mainly about separation, from the woman’s perspective. A
marriage is
breaking up; a child is involved. There is no great sound and fury on
either part; the man is leaving with a sort of weary distaste which is
more deeply wounding and annihilating than straight-out anger. The
child can’t understand any of this and just wants everything
to stay as
it was. The mother is painfully aware that the care she offers the
child is fragile. This pessimistic feeling of inadequacy runs deeply
through the book.
In one story a mother goes back to New Zealand with her son for a
holiday. They drive around, camp in a bog and, for camping equipment,
make do with a tarpaulin, some wobbly sticks and an old shower curtain.
In the night, in his sleep, the child slides out of this makeshift tent
and ends up in the mud uncovered. When he wakes up he has a fever. The
feeling of hopelessness is described so powerfully it makes you ache.
And yet running through this masochism is a kind of joy, an unhealthy
joy maybe, but fierce nonetheless. Sitting in her failure, the
protagonist intensely appreciates life and nature, a feeling that
verges on being mystical.
Hancock makes the natural world become part of her
character’s
emotional life, as happens to all of us in our dreams. The landscape is
described intensely and romantically, wind and trees and light seem to
rush right into the pores of her skin. The boundaries of self blur,
which again is a kind of mysticism or madness. In
‘Windsong’, a
prize-winning story, a boy whose parents are separated kills himself.
He commits this act quietly, methodically. He wants to become one with
nature, one instead of ripped in half as he is by his
parents’
separation. The last thing he sees before unconsciousness rushes over
him is a drawing he did when he was eight years old. It is a bright,
happy picture of two adults and a child on a yacht on a sunny sea. This
story is written with a lyrical, understated intensity of emotion that
is almost unbearable to read.
Hancock is currently writing a novel about matriarchy set in New
Zealand (she is originally from that country). If her novel is as good
as the best of these stories, I will want to read it. There’s
a quality
of
surrender
in Hancock’s
writing that is rich and beautiful. And as well as all the sadness
there is humour and compassion.
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Summer
Stoires
Helen Elliott
The Sydney Morning Herald,
6
January 1996
Melbourne’s Susan Hancock is known and admired by a select
audience
because her stories have that breathless emotional depth that you find
only in very fine writing. They are stories of the lives of educated,
urban middle-class men and women, so they have certain boundaries
because of Hancock’s assumptions about her audience. She
charts the
disturbances of their relationships, the ecstasy and the pain of love.
She’s uncanny in her observation and has a richly slanted
vision framed
by a glittering intelligence. Her best theme is reflecting exactly how
the way we live affects the children of these fraught relationships.
‘Windsong’, a very short tale about a young boy
whose parents are
separating, could be read as emotional and moral instruction.
‘The
Passions of the Poor’ is a confronting, textured story about
a lonely
woman who, rushing away from herself, is suddenly made to face herself
in all her greed, her ignominy and her selfishness. For me, after a
year of exceedingly average writing from the Australian scene,
Hancock’s writing sailed into my world like some startling
and haunting
song. It’s writing to sing about. The gorgeous cover is
thrown in as a
bonus.
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Stories
stall on theories
Sailing
Through
the Amber
The Australian,
29 December
1995
Tegan Bennett (author)
The demand for a good, strong metaphorical skeleton must be uppermost
in a writer’s mind as he or she attempts a short story,
possibly the
most challenging kind of writing there is. The contrivances of language
that can be more easily hidden in the novel (embedded, as it were, in
the flesh of the plot) or stripped bare in the poem must be covered
perfectly in the short story - visible, but not too sharp, not too
obvious.
Susan Hancock’s
Sailing
Through the
Amber has as its title a beautiful metaphor, just
mysterious
enough to catch the eye, but making gorgeous sense when explicated. She
describes the moment of driving through Melbourne traffic lights as
they change from red to green, the sudden in-between-ness, freedom -
chiasma she calls it.
It’s a wonderful image, giving a sense of balance, of an
instinct
utterly right, and it would be wonderful if this book lived up to its
promise. However, in the title story, as in its companions, this
promise is never fulfilled.
Sailing Through the Amber
is a
series of short stories dealing almost exclusively with love and loss.
These are eternal, universal subjects that can always, in the right
hands, bear another reworking. Hancock’s view of them is
expressed
poignantly and occasionally with real magic, but rarely does she find
that exact, exalted moment of art. While she is a stylist of genuine
talent, her skill is hampered by her tone and attitude to her subject
matter.
The knell of defeat sounds in almost every story. This, from
‘The
Porcelain Face’:
‘You’ve
lied to me, all along,’ she said, stepping close to him.
‘All along
you’ve said you weren’t leaving me because of
her.’
‘I’m
not,’ he said. ‘I’m leaving you
because of you.’
While no one in their right mind expects or wants all female
protagonists to be feminist heroines, this kind of passivity, this
dumb, sad, staring-out-at-the-sea response to infidelity and cruelty
eventually becomes frustrating. Perhaps Hancock’s work would
be more
satisfying to read if it were more intellectually driven - while she
can describe things quite superbly, she never really explores them. The
reader emerges from
Sailing
Through
the Amber thirsting for a wild generalisation, a theory
even, of
human relationships, but these never materialise.
Hancock’s writing is at its best when she is portraying
children in
‘The Seal Wife’ and ‘Behind the
Glass’. In these you get a glimpse of
what she could and may yet still be - a thoroughly astute but forgiving
observer of domestic life in all its forms.
The domestic as subject matter does not necessarily make for
dissatisfying reading. Drusilla Modjeska, Helen Garner, Tim Winton can
all take you on an exhaustive tour of their kitchens and bedrooms, and
still exhilarate you. There’s a delicate touch needed with
this kind of
work, somewhere between detailing the furniture and the cute things the
kids say, and investing these ordinary things with more meaning than
they warrant.
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